An e-mail to my teacher

dear miss yuan,
how are you? i am tonny. it is hot this summer holiday. are you reading this at home?
now, i am in hong kong. i'd like to give you my e-mail.
hong kong is not as big as shanghai, but it is a modern and beautiful place. it's very busy in the street. i can also see many tall buildings. they're always bright at night.
i like disney land best. i can see many cartoon characters there like donald duck, mickey mouse, snow white and so on. i want to stay in disney land longer, but the airplane will not wait for us. i have to say goodbye to my disney friends.
i want to tell you more, when i meet you in the new term.
your student tonny
12-07-2006
上海市新黄浦实验学校五（2）班 管宇翔