贴心的人：敬爱的老师-My Beloved Teacher,贴心的人：敬爱的老师-M

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敬爱的老师
【内容提示】
你很小的时候，看见班上有的同学拿的某种东西好，你很想要。于是你就悄悄拿了人家的东西放在书包里归为己有。但是你的心里总是不安。放学时，那位同学发现自己的东西不见了，就告诉了老师，老师帮着找也没找到。老师问你的时候，你老实告诉了老师。老师没有批评你，而是……
【作文示范】
my beloved teacher
teachers are often called “engineers working on the souls of human beings”. everyone is taught by many teachers in his life. and i have met about thirty teachers since i went to school. zhang lizhen, my first teacher, is one of those i will always remember.
ten years ago, i was sent to school. on my first day at school, i found that the boy sitting beside me had a very nice pencil sharpener①with a picture of “monkey king” on it. i liked it very much, and i was eager to get it. so when he was away, i took it and hid it in my schoolbag. but i was filled with fear. i didn't dare to leave my seat.
now the bell rang, announcing the end of classes. the students left for home one by one. but the owner of the pencil sharpener didn't leave. he was looking for it. the teacher came close to him and asked, “what are you doing?” “oh, i have lost my new pencil sharpener,” he said. “it is very nice. my father bought it in town.” “do you remember that you have brought it here?” “yes. and i used it just now.” tears came to his eyes. “don't worry, my son. let me help you.” the teacher began to search for the sharpener here and there. of course, she couldn't find it. the boy began to cry. “don't cry, my boy,” the teacher wiped his tears off his face. “tomorrow, i'll ask your classmates if they have seen it. now, go home first.” she led him out of the classroom. all the time i put my hands in the schoolbag and held the sharpener tightly. i felt my heart beating very fast. i couldn't say anything but dropped my head lower and lower. after a while, the teacher came to me. “why don't you go home? are you waiting for your mother?” she asked me. “i, i…” my voice was trembling. i took out the pencil sharpener slowly and began to weep. my teacher understood. she looked at me affectionately, saying, “my boy, you are an honest child, though you made a mistake. since you know you were wrong, i think you are still a good boy.” then she patted me on the shoulder, “remember, you'll be a good student.”
the next day, the teacher gave me a nice pencil sharpener. she didn't say anything but gave me a meaning smile. her words and smile were engraved on my memory②. i have kept the sharpener, because it tells me how to be an honest boy. and i will never forget my first teacher----zhang lizhen.
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年8、9合期）
【词语解释】
①pencil sharpener 卷笔刀
②(be)engraved [in'greivd] on one's memory 印在脑海中
【写法指要】
作者在文中写自己小时候偷拿了别人的东西而后又负疚地把所拿东西交给老师的事。老师没有因此而批评他、责难他，而是表扬他是“一个诚实的孩子”，并买了卷笔刀送给他。这样师生之情就表现出来了。
第一段用“漏斗式”（funnel）引入话题，先说所有老师，再具体到张老师。第二段和第三段大部分都是写作者作为小孩子时候的心理活动。第三段后半部分和第四段写老师用语言和行动教育人的方式。最后我们可以得出这样的结论：作者是诚实的人，老师是敬爱的（beloved）人，是贴心的人。

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